Help with Reception Insert Wording - Please

Ok, we are on the last leg of creating our invites.. Let me tell you Sarah Goff of Signatures by Sarah is AMAZING !!!  We are almost done, I just need to finalize the wording on the reception insert... Here is what we have now, can you please help me - this just doesn't sound good at all to me.


 


The Celebration Continues


Please join us for cocktails, Dinner, and Dancing at an adult reception honoring the new mr and mrs moreno.




immediatly following the ceremony, reception will be located in the coronado room of sunol valley golf club.




Formal attire requested


 


I haven't even gotton to spelling problems yet.  Does anyone out there have any idea's to make this sound more smooth ?

Posted on January 25, 2011 at 4:39 am
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The Celebration Continues


Please join the new Mr. and Mrs. M for cocktails, dinner and dancing.
Coronado Room of the Sunol Valley Golf Club
Formal Attire Requested


For things like attire and location, I think it's best to list them.

Posted on January 25, 2011 at 4:41 am
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Help with Reception Insert Wording Please photo 2645760-1


Help with Reception Insert Wording Please photo 2645760-2


Help with Reception Insert Wording Please photo 2645760-3


 


 

Posted on January 25, 2011 at 4:44 am
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lsjhik I like that better : ) 


 


Anyone else have ideas for me....

Posted on January 25, 2011 at 4:44 am
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Thank You LadyESQ

Posted on January 25, 2011 at 4:46 am
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Agreed with lsjhik on the wording. I think it works best to list the special items. You could add "Adult Reception" either at the bottom of the list, or as a footer at the bottom.

Posted on January 25, 2011 at 4:54 am
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Thanks girls I sent this off to Sarah.... I feel so bad, maybe this will be the day we finish...  I keep changing things :  ) Sarah is a saint !!

Posted on January 25, 2011 at 5:05 am

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