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In joyful anticipation of our marriage


on Saturday, August 29th, 2009


Celeste AnaLee Lastname


&


Grant Carl Lastname


together with our parents


Mr. & Mrs. Spike Lastname


&


Mr. & Mrs. Trent Lastname


request the honour of your presence


at two o'clock in the afternoon


Trinity Lutheran Church


1363 First Avenue SW


Cedar Rapids, IA


 


Reception to follow


Lowe Park


4500 10th Street


Marion, IA


 


 


 

Posted on May 20, 2009 at 5:42 am
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Rsvp


We have reserved ___ seat(s) in your honor.
M
___________________________
___ Accept with pleasure
___ Decline with regret
Please respond by July 31st, 2009


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


Directions


      Ceremony to Reception


 


1:  Start out going NE on 1ST AVE SW toward downtown.  0.8 mi 


2:  Merge onto I-380 N via the ramp on the LEFT.  8.9 mi 


3:  Take the EXIT 28, toward TODDVILLE/ROBINS.  0.2 mi


4:  Turn RIGHT onto COUNTY HOME RD.  5.2 mi


5:  Turn RIGHT onto N 10TH ST.  2.0 mi


6:  End at 4500 N 10th St Marion, IA 52302


 


Estimated Time: 19 minutes Estimated Distance: 17.09 miles


 


 

Posted on May 20, 2009 at 5:42 am
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i would change "our" to "their" and put spaces between your name.  otherwise it looks great!!


In joyful anticipation of their marriage


on Saturday, August 29th, 2009



Celeste AnaLee Lastname


&


Grant Carl Lastname



together with their parents


Mr. & Mrs. Spike Lastname

Posted on May 20, 2009 at 6:11 am
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I concur with eac...otherwise they look awesome. =o)

Posted on May 20, 2009 at 6:14 am
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YOU ARE MY DATE TWIN! Yay!!!

Posted on May 20, 2009 at 6:16 am
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I'm not sure about this one...I think usually the date of the wedding would be after presence.   And you should spell out the date. So see below




In joyful anticipation of our marriage


Celeste AnaLee Lastname


&


Grant Carl Lastname


together with our parents


Mr. & Mrs. Spike Lastname


&


Mr. & Mrs. Trent Lastname


request the honour of your presence


on Saturday, the twenty-ninth of August


two thousand nine


two o'clock in the afternoon


Trinity Lutheran Church


1363 First Avenue SW


Cedar Rapids, IA


 

Posted on May 20, 2009 at 6:19 am
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I think the together with our parents sounds off for some reason...
Posted on May 20, 2009 at 6:35 am
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I agree with EC and MISSYOU.  Put "their" and spell out date.

Posted on May 20, 2009 at 6:39 am

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