invite wording HELP!

Okay, so i have been fiddling with our invite wording, and I'm getting so frustrated!!!  So many different websites are saying totally different things, so i am totally confused as to what the correct etiquette is, what the appropriate wording is, and what should be capitalized and what shouldn't.  Could you ladies check out my rough draft and give me suggestions please?  I'd really appreciate it.  At least we finally found a font we love!!       Thanks!!!


 


Along with their parents


Renee AnneMarie ____


And


Jason Michael _____


Request the honor of your presence at their marriage


On Saturday, the Eleventh of October


Two-Thousand and Eight


At two-thirty in the afternoon


St. Martin's Catholic Church


___ (city)


 


                                Reception to follow at __ Restaurant, __(City)

Posted on July 8, 2008 at 2:15 pm
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hello~ I may not be much of a help but this is what we did:


"Together with their parents," (or families) rather then along...


and


I didn't put the line in (Two-Thousand)


For time, you could also put "Half past two o'clock.." (Not sure if we put the "at"?)


HTH!


- HMM :)

Posted on July 8, 2008 at 2:20 pm
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Posted on July 8, 2008 at 2:25 pm
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so i do need to put "honour" instead of "honor"?    i thought that was kind of weird, but it seems to be the norm.       We're using "P22 Corinthia" for our font.  I tired get the invite wording to appear in our font up above, but i couldnt get it to work...

Posted on July 8, 2008 at 2:40 pm
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Crane & Co. is always my go-to for stationary etiquette. This is what they suggest: Also note that you can spell honor (honour) either way, according to etiquette, but most people use honour.  


Crane Co is always photo 53606-1

Posted on July 9, 2008 at 7:50 am

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