My Menu Suggestions/Opinions

So, I received some 1st drafts of my menu from my staionary guru Phyllis of Sweet Paper Studios, and I'm looking for some input, opinions and advice.



What do you think of these two? We want to incorporate the "Tree" motif that's in our monogram, which I think she'll go back in and add, anything else?






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Posted on April 15, 2008 at 10:07 am
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I think I'm hungry now =)

hmm...I like the first one, except that green "ribbon" look towards the bottom of the oval. I'm not too sure why though. They are both very cute though. Love the little birdies
Posted on April 15, 2008 at 10:11 am
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Thanks! I think I'd want to ribbon gone from the bottom, too. Maybe incorporate the green ribbon on the second one to the top of the Oval one?
Posted on April 15, 2008 at 10:23 am
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They both look great,but I like the one with the white oval better. I agree maybe take the green ribbon on the bottom off.
Posted on April 15, 2008 at 10:52 am
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I like the one w/the white circle, but I like the top of the brown one.
Posted on April 15, 2008 at 10:55 am
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Very cute! I agree with Chica. And also, may want to bump the text under refreshments to align with the text under sides. Not a big deal though.

Now I really want cake... mmm...
Posted on April 15, 2008 at 11:27 am
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I agree with all who posted. I also need to go now in search of a snack. . .
Posted on April 15, 2008 at 11:33 am
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I like the first one, but think that the green ribbon should be behind "Menu" like it is on the 2nd.
Posted on April 15, 2008 at 11:45 am
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Thanks, all! We seem to have the same editing ideas for this, too.

I'm relaying it back to the designer to get it all tweaked and I hope to have it all finished, soon!
Posted on April 16, 2008 at 2:15 am

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