proof my invitation wording!

can i have a few pairs of fresh eyes take a look at my invite wording before i send them off to the printer? please and thank you!


MR. AND MRS. ROBERT CHARLES BURK


REQUEST THE HONOUR OF YOUR PRESENCE


AT THE MARRIAGE OF THEIR DAUGHTER


Ashley Maria


TO


Tyler Joseph Dumouchel


SON OF


MR. AND MRS. JOSEPH A. DUMOUCHEL


 


 


 


SATURDAY, THE SEVENTEENTH OF JULY


TWO THOUSAND AND TEN


AT Two O’CLOCK IN THE AFTERNOON


 


Saint hyacinth catholic church


201 lebreton street north


OTTAWA, ONTARIO


 


 


Reception to follow


At half past five in the evening


museum of science and technology


1867 st. Laurent boulevard


 

Posted on November 28, 2009 at 1:53 am
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People are putting Two Thousand Ten, as opposed to AND Ten.


 


You have all caps everywhere except on "Two" in Two O'CLOCK.


 


Each word should be capitalized for your church name as wel as the street.


 


Your reception location should also be in Caps (at least the first letter) for the title and street address.


 


No spelling errors it looks great.

Posted on November 28, 2009 at 2:58 am
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I don't see any spelling/gramatical errors...can't wait to see the finished product!

Posted on November 28, 2009 at 4:17 am
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1867 st. Laurent boulevard


Should st be spelled out?  Saint?


 

Posted on November 28, 2009 at 4:36 am
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Agree with all above. FI's Dad's middle name should be spelt out if your Dad's is.

Posted on November 28, 2009 at 1:24 pm

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