1st DIY Project - What You Think?

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smileybride
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07/04/2009 at 01:19 pm

Please give me your comments/suggetions.  Thanks! Anything I should do to make any of the design to look better?

#1

#2

#3

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CandiceTheTa..
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07/04/2009 at 01:21 pm

on the first invite, I would add the cherry blossom branch to the bottom left hand corner as well, to balance it. But thats just me, I'm all abou symmetry!

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kblove hostess
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07/04/2009 at 01:23 pm

i like one!!! similar to candice, i would add another cherry branch, but for me, i would add it upside-down on the upper left side of the invite.  can you make it more of a watermark or lighter? 

 

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CandiceTheTa..
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07/04/2009 at 01:26 pm

the first one IS my favorite out of the three though.

Also! I have to suggest researching some different wording options for RSVP cards, the way you ask how many guests to expect leaves it VERY open ended. What happens when you invite someone and you get back a RSVP that says they'll be bringing their whole family? :D

I SO wish I would have done something different. I am STILL getting phone calls... "What does the "M" Mean?" and so forth. UGH!

I would suggest something more like

Your Prompt Response Is Greatly Appreciated

Name______________________________

{ } Happily Accepts ( __ of __ guests will attend)

(  ) Regretfull Declines ( ___ of ___ guests are unable to attend)

Also, Make sure you Number the cards in case people forget to put their names! I know... Its terrible.

 

In the above example you can fill in the number of guests in the household your really inviting, that way those single guests know whats up!~

 

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ag2010
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07/04/2009 at 01:27 pm

#1 - More of a difference in size of the type. and the cherry blossom and the flourish dont seem to flow on the invite.

#2 - is better and flows down the side with the flourish... a lot better. id still do the names larger.

#3 is better, but the same thing with the type as I said above.

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Sherita
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07/04/2009 at 01:30 pm

I like the second one

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eraganrn
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07/04/2009 at 01:35 pm

i like the layout of number one, but i think the flourish and the cherry blossom is too much. i think i'd pick one or the other.

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slurpee
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07/04/2009 at 03:30 pm

cute!

my only recommendation is for your rsvp card, where you have written "please indicate a number of guests."

 

i would recommend writing "please indicate number of guests" or "please indicate the number of guests" or "number attending" :)

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kdh126
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07/04/2009 at 03:43 pm

I'd do the 1st one, but minus the flourish, add an extra blossom.

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flutterby85
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07/04/2009 at 04:11 pm

hmmm. i like the design of the first one the best, but i would use different fonts. the font for the names is good but i would change the rest of the wording to a different font,  maybe something a little more simple like the one use for #3.

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