Invite - How does this look?

What do you think?  Anything look off?

NOTE: Font/formatting didn't paste in. . .

In joyful anticipation of our marriage

on Saturday, August 29th, 2009

Celeste AnaLee Lastname

&

Grant Carl Lastname

together with our parents

Mr. & Mrs. Spike Lastname

&

Mr. & Mrs. Trent Lastname

request the honour of your presence

at two o'clock in the afternoon

Trinity Lutheran Church

1363 First Avenue SW

Cedar Rapids, IA

Reception to follow

Lowe Park

4500 10th Street

Marion, IA

Rsvp

We have reserved ___ seat(s) in your honor.
M___________________________
___ Accept with pleasure
___ Decline with regret
Please respond by July 31^st, 2009

Directions

      Ceremony to Reception

1:  Start out going NE on 1ST AVE SW toward downtown.  0.8 mi 

2:  Merge onto I-380 N via the ramp on the LEFT.  8.9 mi 

3:  Take the EXIT 28, toward TODDVILLE/ROBINS.  0.2 mi

4:  Turn RIGHT onto COUNTY HOME RD.  5.2 mi

5:  Turn RIGHT onto N 10TH ST.  2.0 mi

6:  End at 4500 N 10th St Marion, IA 52302

Estimated Time: 19 minutes Estimated Distance: 17.09 miles

i would change "our" to "their" and put spaces between your name.  otherwise it looks great!!

In joyful anticipation of their marriage

on Saturday, August 29th, 2009

Celeste AnaLee Lastname

&

Grant Carl Lastname

together with their parents

Mr. & Mrs. Spike Lastname

I concur with eac...otherwise they look awesome. =o)

YOU ARE MY DATE TWIN! Yay!!!

I'm not sure about this one...I think usually the date of the wedding would be after presence.   And you should spell out the date. So see below

In joyful anticipation of our marriage

Celeste AnaLee Lastname

&

Grant Carl Lastname

together with our parents

Mr. & Mrs. Spike Lastname

&

Mr. & Mrs. Trent Lastname

request the honour of your presence

on Saturday, the twenty-ninth of August

two thousand nine

two o'clock in the afternoon

Trinity Lutheran Church

1363 First Avenue SW

Cedar Rapids, IA

I think the together with our parents sounds off for some reason...

I agree with EC and MISSYOU.  Put "their" and spell out date.